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PostSubject: feed back please   Sun Jun 29, 2014 5:42 pm

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could i get some feedback please? all apps
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PostSubject: Re: feed back please   Sun Jun 29, 2014 5:57 pm

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PostSubject: Re: feed back please   Sun Jun 29, 2014 7:05 pm

colors are really uncoordinated, also lebron is not the most visible thing he is kind of overshadowed by the bright effects. I would change the exposure of the background layer and make it darker.

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PostSubject: Re: feed back please   Sun Jun 29, 2014 7:10 pm

i would change how the words look otherwise i like it.
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PostSubject: Re: feed back please   Sun Jun 29, 2014 7:28 pm

I really like this actually, contrary to my buddy Excvl I like the different color, makes it look interesting.
Actually a big fan of this piece.

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PostSubject: Re: feed back please   Sun Jun 29, 2014 7:31 pm

i just read that it was all apps so i change my mind about the words this is spectacular for appsĀ afro
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PostSubject: Re: feed back please   Sun Jun 29, 2014 7:35 pm

Although I do feel you could make lebron pop a bit more, with a slightly darker background, and more definition on him.

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PostSubject: Re: feed back please   Sun Jun 29, 2014 9:14 pm

ok thanks guys
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PostSubject: Re: feed back please   Mon Jun 30, 2014 12:49 am

1 thing. Not a fan of the outer glow on the text.
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PostSubject: Re: feed back please   Fri Jul 04, 2014 1:44 pm

Take out the text. Desaturated the background as well. A lot drawing focus away from Lebron which isn't what you want.
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